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Six words to surrender by – Eroticheat & Eroticnotebook

Following on from the #sixwords play with Bettiepeach and Eroticheat – there was this pretty little set between me and Eroticheat – aptly named #sixwordstosurrenderby

His words are in red, mine in brown.



*rolls up sleaves* drop your jeans!

pay attention you already disrobed me

your attentive attractive buttocks ímpatiently displayed

the sluttish ass demands red heat?

challenge laid I can but sucumb

Legs spread, arse presented, hands clenched

warning, arousal but no orgasm awaits

thwack! As you shudder. Testing, teasing

speak for yourself photoboy, a challenge

leaving your plump desire unfulfilled. Thwack!

inhales, exhales, arches back out more

reddening alabaster cheeks aroused. Left untouched

still wet from play, moisture tempts

bent over the table. Thwack! Groan!

a last swish, left bound. Waiting

sighs, arching, presents legs wider, more

spits at realisation, delight in torment

you tricked me, not playing fair

I never play fair. too predictable?

sighs and relaxes, please pass cushion

your desire for a pillow granted

small concessions elicit further willing submission

Thanks for reading,

Ruby x

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2 Responses to Six words to surrender by – Eroticheat & Eroticnotebook

  1. David England April 18, 2011 at 4:50 pm #

    Six words-mighty hot little exchange. Made me horny.

    Reply
    • Ruby April 18, 2011 at 7:25 pm #

      Well that is the job of a smut writer!
      Glad you enjoyed it David I can only take half the credit.

      Ruby

      Reply

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