Puzzle

I want to be the things you’ve not yet asked for,

To fill the gaps that punctuation suggests

But only a body can fill.

I want to dip and curve,

Ripple and bow,

Give to you pleasure you’ve not yet named.

Bring it forth with the simple prayer of words,

Shape them with your tongue syllable by syllable.

Lick and suck letter by letter,

Juice the future and sound out your need.

I am yours.

The treasure in the puzzle box,

Waiting to be sprung free.

Thanks for reading,

Ruby x

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5 Responses to Puzzle

  1. fridayam December 1, 2012 at 10:31 am #

    I love the rhythm of this, the ebb and flow. Gorgeous x

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    • Ruby December 1, 2012 at 6:47 pm #

      Thank you Fridayam x

      Reply
  2. Harper Eliot December 4, 2012 at 4:03 pm #

    Oh, that’s lovely: “Shape them with your tongue syllable by syllable.” I love how you mention the tongue and then make it work with the repetition of the word ‘syllable’. Beautiful.

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    • Ruby December 4, 2012 at 4:20 pm #

      Hi Harper,

      I’m so glad you like it, thank you for the compliment.

      Ruby

      Reply
  3. Alan January 12, 2013 at 5:11 pm #

    amazing, i am a fashion n Glamour photographer, i love your artistic approach and chosen words…keep it up, if you ever need a photographer for any kind of shoots, please get in touch…hope to see at The Eroticon

    Reply

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